Interesting melodies with a very oriental feel. Most of your melodies are really enjoyable. One or two of the chords and notes sound a little unusual, but not bad. Just unexpected.

Your snare drum stands out a bit too much and it overpowers the rest of the track whenver it's hit.

The lead guitar (or is it bagpipes? It seems to change!) adds some energy to the piece, but I think it should do something more with the melody. It seems to vary a bit but not nearly enough. This part feels like an Oldfield track, but it lacks that "lead guitar going crazy" feel. Crazy isn't always good, although this could benefit from a little more work on the guitar.

The ending is sudden and sounds like you weren't sure how to go about ending the piece. If this was your "different ending", what was the original ending? Just curious!

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